I've been working on translating a P&P gaming system that my brothers created. I'm looking for people to read it and give me some feedback on it.
- Is it easy to read?
- Is it easy to understand?
- Would you be able to play on this system from simply reading it without someone explaining it to you?
- Point out any leftover german words that I might have missed.
- Point out sections that seem to complicated and need simplifying.
Anyone that is interested please let me know here or on discord and I'll send it to you (I'm Saul the friendly Antbear on discord)
WARNING: It's 53 pages long (so I need people that are really into nerding out to dig their teeth into this)